Crucible Year Peter Yuill
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T_309

The work as shown. Every value below comes from vae.db, the master database of the Crucible Year.

Recorded

Date
2026.05.14, day 137
Size
70 × 180 cm
Paper
S3, Tanxi Jing Pi, raw
Inks
MB4, MB5, MB6
Phase
P2 The Switch
Shown on the site
yes (V23 rating of 5.0 or higher)
Early storage triage
SA: save, archive (Peter's early system, since retired)

Measured · V23 (v23.8)

V23 rating
6.2
Form
2.4
Tonal depth
2
Layering
2
Composition
2.8
Material and surface
1.2
Ink cover
71%
Dark share
27%
Tonal steps
5
Flaws named by the reads
bloom 4, ring 4, water stain 5, tide line 1, other 1
The V23 rating runs from 1 to 9, with 5 the middle of this body of work. It is the engine's reading, and the reference the archive is measured against.

Older engine

V7
8
From an earlier engine (V7). Its scale differs from V23's, so it is only ever compared with other readings by the same engine.

How the number was made

Read by the Visual Analysis Engine, version 23.8, on 2026.10.06: measured by code, then read 5 times by Claude Opus 5.5 against three reference paintings (R1 to R3), each read independent of the others. How the engine works.

WHAT THE CODE SEES

Three views of one sheet.

Left, the photograph. Centre, the tone stretch the model is shown beside it: the darkest 45% of tones spread over the whole range, so flat black, banding and stains show. Right, every pixel as the measuring code classes it: cyan black ink, deep teal translucent grey, stone the palest ink, near black bare paper.

T_309T_309, tone-stretchedT_309, classed by brightness
71%of the sheet carries ink
Black 27%Grey 46%Light 26% SHARE OF THE INK, NOT OF THE SHEET
TONAL STEPS

5 families of tone.

Every inked pixel's brightness in 64 bins, smoothed; each circled peak holds at least 4% of the ink. Life inside the black: 0.039 (under 0.045 reads as flat).

0.300.7512345 BLACK INK TRANSLUCENT GREYS PALEST INK, 0.88 LUMINANCE OF EVERY INKED PIXEL, 64 BINS. PAPER (ABOVE 0.88) IS LEFT OUT.
FIVE READS

Five reads, agreeing on 2 of 5 qualities.

Each quality placed on its ladder by each read, and the mean the engine keeps. Where reads differ, they differ by one rung; close calls resolve down.

READ 1READ 2READ 3READ 4READ 5MEAN
Form3FLUENT2BUILT2BUILT2BUILT3FLUENT2.4
Tonal depth2MODELLED2MODELLED2MODELLED2MODELLED2MODELLED2.0
Layering2LEGIBLE2LEGIBLE2LEGIBLE2LEGIBLE2LEGIBLE2.0
Composition3COMMANDING3COMMANDING3COMMANDING2WORKING3COMMANDING2.8
Material and surface1FLAWED1FLAWED1FLAWED1FLAWED2SOUND1.2

READ 1, IN ITS OWN WORDS

“A fluent, commanding S-sweep with good dry-brush handling, held back by a flat black core, only two passes, and a milky bleed patch beside the grey wash at top left.”

Form · FLUENT

Main S-stroke follows brush travel throughout, with split-bristle striations at the tail; the left grey arc is built from the same sweep; the dark head is slightly heavy.

WEAKEST bulky dark head of stroke, upper right

STRONGEST dry-brush S-sweep from bottom centre to right

Tonal depth · MODELLED

The grey wash and the stroke tail show grain and arcs, but the black core is broadly flat (modulation 0.039, under 0.045); there are five tonal steps.

WEAKEST dense black core of stroke, upper centre-right

STRONGEST striated grey tail of the sweep

Layering · LEGIBLE

The grey circular wash pass and the black sweep stay distinct where they cross at centre-left; there are only about two passes, and the black hides what lies beneath it at right.

WEAKEST black core covers underlying grey

STRONGEST black stroke over the grey circular wash, left-centre

Composition · COMMANDING

The S-curve carries the eye from the bottom-left arc to the right edge; the empty paper top-centre and bottom-right is shaped by the curve; the top-left corner is weaker.

WEAKEST pale feathered patch, top left

STRONGEST diagonal S-curve crossing the whole sheet

Material and surface · FLAWED

A pale, cloudy feathered patch and bleed edge sit against the grey wash at top left, and a whorled ring sits inside the grey mass at left-centre; both are visible in the colour view.

WEAKEST milky bleed edge, top-left grey wash

STRONGEST dry-brush bristle striations in stroke tail

FLAWS

6 distinct places, 2 major.

Each read must name every flaw and where it is, in a ninth of the sheet. Here the reads named flaws in 6 distinct places, 15 mentions in all across 5 reads; the number in each ninth is how many times a flaw was named there. Reads agreeing on a place strengthen the evidence for one flaw; they do not multiply it. A major flaw holds Material and surface at rung 1.

5 × BLOOM, WATER STAIN, TIDE LINE · MAJOR“pale feathered milky patch with bleeding edge…”1 × WATER STAIN“faint grey tint across the upper paper”5 × RING, WATER STAIN · MAJOR“whorled tide-like rings inside grey wash”1 × OTHER“scattered drips below the sweep”1 × BLOOM“soft grey bloom spreading below dark head”2 × WATER STAIN“milky pale streaks in grey wash below sweep”WATER STAINBLOOMRINGTIDE LINEOTHERMAJOR
GEOMETRY

Measured from the 16-bit master.

The previous engine (V22) measured this sheet's master file: 2 principal ink masses traced (cyan), 6 enclosed voids at true size in their grid cells (amber), the main gesture from start to end (red). Of 19 edge segments, 42% crisp, 32% soft or bloomed, 26% broken.

A1B1C1D1E1F1A2B2C2D2E2F2A3B3C3D3E3F3H1H2H3H4H5H6
RULE 1Two tonal steps or fewer

Tonal depth held at rung 1.

5 steps: not applied
RULE 2A major flaw

Material held at rung 1. Mild waves in the unmounted paper are never a flaw.

3 major flaws: applied
RULE 3Any quality below 0.5

The rating cannot exceed 4.

lowest 1.2
RULE 4At least two valid reads

A read that breaks the reply format is discarded.

5 of 5 valid
THE ARITHMETIC

V23 rating 6.2.

Engine v23.8, 5 reads. Fixed arithmetic, the same for every painting; the constants were set on 24 randomly chosen paintings so the median sheet scores 5. The scale is relative to this archive, not to painting in general, and a difference of less than half a point between two paintings is noise.

MEAN RUNG2.08(2.4 + 2.0 + 2.0 + 2.8 + 1.2) ÷ 5
→
RAW5.161 + 2 × 2.08
→
RATING6.25 + 2.086 × (5.16 − 4.60)